Hee Hee! Cool, great song that. The thing with the vox, think, is that when you have a low vox like that, it has to have a little grit 'n gravel so that it punches through. If you do re-do the vox I would go for a bit of grit. No smoking though Mr M, you know it's bad for you. If you have nicholas' book ReaMix, he has an astounding solution for smoky gravelly vox without choking on 40 a day. Oh, and note to the "mystery" guitarist (as if :D) I wondered whether the guitar break playing the melody at 1:20 couldn't have more of a 6 string bass wichita lineman sound? I do it with my bass on bridge pick-up and roll off the lows.